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TASK  2  EXAMPLE  ESSAY:  PROBLEM/  SOLUTION  -­‐  INTERNET

 

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The  internet  has  transformed  the  way  information  is  shared  and  consumed,  but  it  

has  also  created  problems  that  did  not  exist  before.  

 

What   are   the   most   serious   problems   associated   with   the   internet   and   what  

solutions  can  you  suggest?  

 

Write  at  least  250  words.  

 

 

You  can  use  the  same  structure  as  the  advantage/  disadvantage  essay  here  –  3  

problems  and  3  solutions.  

 

Follow  this  pattern:  

 

Describe  the  situation.  

Say  there  are  problems  with  this.  

Introduce  what  you  will  

do  in  this  essay.    

Linker  word,  

topic  sentence  –  to  say  there  are  problems.  

Linker  word,  

problem  

one.  

Explanation/  example.  

Linker  word,  

problem  two.  

Explanation/  example.  

Linker  word,  

problem  three.  

Explanation/  example.  

   

Linker  word,  

topic  sentence  –  to  say  there  are  solutions.  

Linker  word,  

solution  

one.  

Explanation/  example.  

Linker  word,  

solution  two.  

Explanation/  example.  

Linker  word,  

solution  three.  

Explanation/  example.  

   

Linker  word,

 

summary  to  say  there  are  problems.  

Opinion.  

   

Plan:  

Introduction  

 

Problems  

1  Cyber-­‐bullying  

2  Access  to  inappropriate  content  

3  Privacy  

 

Solutions  

1  Education  

2  Parental  controls  

3  Software  and  laws  for  data  protection  

 

Conclusion  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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TASK  2  EXAMPLE  ESSAY:  PROBLEM/  SOLUTION  -­‐  INTERNET

 

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Essay:    

 

Our  lives  have  been  revolutionalised  by  the  internet  and  the  way  we  can  share  

information   with   others   around   the   world   so   easily.

 

However,   a   number   of  

problems  have  emerged  as  a  result  of  this.

 

This  essay  will  discuss  a  few  of  the  

most  significant  problems  and  offer  some  possible  solutions.

 

 

On  the  one  hand,

 

there  are  a  number  of  issues  that  have  been  created  through  

widespread  use  of  the  internet.

 

One  of  the  biggest  issues  is

 the  way  it  is  used  by  

cyber-­‐bullies.  

They  post  private  or  false  information  about  people  and  verbally  

abuse   them,   which   can   have   serious   consequences,   even   suicide.  

In   addition,

 

children   often   have   access   to   inappropriate   content.  

This   can   result   in   young  

people   committing   crimes.

 

Finally,  

another   major   problem   is   privacy.  

People’s  

personal   and   even   financial   information   can   sometimes   be   shared,   leading   to  

theft  and  fraud.  

 

Although

 

there   are   serious   problems   connected   to   the   internet,   they   are   not  

without  solutions.

 

One  solution  could  be

 to  educate  people  about  the  correct  and  

appropriate   use   of   the   internet.  

The   education   should   focus   on   cyber-­‐bullying  

and  the  drastic  consequences  it  can  have  for  the  victims.

 

Furthermore,

 parents  

should  place  restrictions  on  their  children’s  use  of  the  internet.  

They  can  prevent  

them  from  viewing  certain  sites  and  videos.

 

Also,

 there  should  be  software  and  

laws   in   place   to   protect   people’s   private   data.  

People   should   know   that   they  

cannot  simply  steal  people’s  online  identity  and  data.  

 

In  conclusion,

 

the  internet  can  be  a  dangerous  tool  if  it  is  not  managed  correctly.

 

However,   if   it   is   used   in   the   proper   way   it   can   be   an   incredible   resource   for  

everyone.

 

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