Mba 010 Week Assignment (Rev 2)

Part A (25 points)
Question 1 – Return to week 1 assignment and analyze your writing on Part B. Identify and explain three specific opportunities for improvement.
It becomes more convenient and more profitable to have access to some good than to own it for people.

Access to use the stuffs that we don’t have can be also helpful for individual improvement.

A large number of specific services grow, which connect those who own the resource with those who need it.
Question 2 – Write a one-paragraph email poorly. And then follow it with the same message but written well. Include a subject line. Explain the difference.
Dear Shodmonov

I request a vacation from Monday till Friday. I will look forward to your approval.

Best regards

Muhayyo
Subject: Vacation request for September, 10-13

Dear Mr. Shodmonov,
I would like to request a vacation from Monday, September 9th till Friday, September 13th.

I will make sure to complete all my current projects and pending tasks in advance before the vacation. My colleagues Diyora and Rustam will cover my responsibilities during my absence.

Looking forward to your approval.
Sincerely,

Muhayyo

Sales manager
Difference between two emails is that the second one is written completely and clearly. For example it has subject line that introduce the content of email. Moreover, the second email is addressed formally as a rule in the formal organizations. The first is too short and unclear to understand. It has not subject line and person’s position that sent this email.
Q uestion 3 – Using a lemonade stand as an example, produce a short video explaining the concept of value creation. You will be evaluated on the clarity of your presentation.
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