Ielts writing Task & Advanced megapack: ielts academic & General Training

Full Sample Response 1
The table shows information about the number of
visitors to the London Natural History Museum between 2000
to 2020.
Overall, what stands out from the table is that there was
a considerable upward trend of people who visited the
museum for tourism.
Looking at the details, 52 visitors chose wanting to see
specific displays as their reason in 2000, then the figure went
down slightly to around 48 people in 2010. In 2020, the
number of visitors wanting to see specific displays rose to 54.
By contrast, around 7 visitors chose tourism for visiting the
museum in 2000. Next, the figure almost doubled with 13
people in 2010 and then levelled off at 22 visitors in 2020.
Regarding school trip, 15 people chose it as their reason
in 2000. There was a significant increase to 22 visitors in
2010 and then levelled off at 20 people in 2020. Looking at
work, the figure started at 10 people in 2000, then marginally
increased to 11 people in 2020. Lastly, it fell slightly again to
10 visitors in 2020.
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Suggested Answers
The table shows information about the number of
visitors to the London Natural History Museum between 2000
to 2020. –(“
between
X 
and 
Y” or “
from
X
 to
Y”)
Overall, what stands out from the table is that - 
(this is a
waste of words and it makes the report look less
professional. It also repeats the word table unnecessarily)
there was a considerable upward trend of people who visited
the museum for tourism.
Looking at the details, 52 visitors chose wanting to see
specific displays as their reason in 2000, then the figure 
-
(should be plural)
went down slightly to around 48 people in
2010. In 2020, the number of visitors wanting to see specific
displays rose to 54. By contrast, around 7 visitors chose
tourism for visiting the museum in 2000. Next, the figure
almost doubled with 13 people in 2010 and then levelled off –