Ielts writing Essentials (book 2)

TOPIC No. 36 PRIVATE 
vs
 GOVERNMENT INSTITUTIONS
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Do you think that Private Institutions Should be Banned? You should write at least 250
words.
Private institutions should not be banned. As by banning them, it will mean, abating the
choices made by parents for the future of their children. They may not get best education and
quality of studies in Government institutions. Hence, life for the bright students may be
downsized. Furthermore, consequences could be devastating for the future of an individual
and perhaps for the whole nation.
On the other hand, there will be a huge positive impact on the way our Government Schools
work if the Private Institutions are banned. Once government institutions realize their
problems and shortcomings, the quality of teaching and the code of practice will improve. As
the code of conduct improves in the Government Institutions, their way of teaching will be
more pragmatic. Also there will definitely be profits from schools which will go in
Government Treasury, once the private institutes are banned. Hence, the school conditions
will improve. These schools will then retrospect the multi-religious culture and will teach
students to be respectful towards other religions. Parents will definitely benefit from this
decision by paying less tuition fees in Government institutions as compared to the Private
Institutions. Furthermore, there will be a sense of equality between students and there will no
rich or poor in schools.
Absence of private schools may become a source of anguish for the middle and high income
people. It may be misunderstood as a loss in freedom of choice the Government has taken the
right of choice from away parents for their children's or it may be considered that education.
Some of the children who need special education or attention need private education. For
instance, people with disabilities will be cared more in private institutions for their needs as
compared to the Government Institutions. Similarly, the blind the or deaf also need special
attention and care which, in my opinion, is impossible to be provided in Government
Institutions.
In nutshell, I would like to assert the importance of 
Private Institutes
in our community.
Private Institutions cater to the needs for all types of students. They always change their
teaching styles and skills in accord to the demand of students, providing them with high
standard of education. 
So I strongly feel that private education should not be banned.

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