Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
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Children should start to use computers in their early school careers, becoming aware 
of the importance of 
the
correct use of such 
an 
important instrument. Computers are 
a communication way, a new research approach and the most used method to 
categorize information.
There is a tendency to believe that handy written skills should be overtaken by digital 
ones. As far as I’m concerned, this belief is extreme and it is difficult to agree 
completely. Arguably, new generations, also known as “native digitals” will be much 
more oriented to think that computers can replace pens; however, this is still difficult 
to accept by 
those 
who, like myself, 
have
grown in different circumstances
which 
were
much less sophisticated. 
In conclusion, 
the 
modern world hinges on computers and technology and new 
generations should be introduced to these instruments as 
early
as possible. A better 
preparation in childhood will ensure an easier career, whatever this will be. 
(362 words) 
Score: 6.5 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Addresses the task only partially. Expresses a position but the development is not 
always clear. Presents some main ideas but these are limited and not sufficiently 
developed; there may be irrelevant detail. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Logically organises information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughout. 
Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-
/over-use.Present s a clear central topic within each paragraph.