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(CC) Coherence and Cohesion



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(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Logically organises information and ideas. There is clear progression throughout.
Comment [27]: 
If you start a sentence
with 
“because”, you need two clauses! 
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Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under 
use. Presents a clear central topic to each paragraph.
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. Uses 
less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation. May 
produce some errors in word choice, spelling and word formation.
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. Has 
good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors.
 
Example 4 
What to do in leisure time is a highly debatable topic. It is often suggested by some 
that it is essential to use 
it 
for activities that improve the mind, while others think that 
mind resting is better. In my opinion, these options are both beneficial in certain ways 
and it is crucial to find a balance during leisure time.
Some people thought that many people are dealing with stress while in school or 
work. Therefore, they believe that putting 
their 
mind
s
at rest in 
their 
free time is vital 
for decreasing the
ir
stress level. In addition to that, they also believe this method 
helps people to prepare for harder times. In other words
the 
mind can be re-
energized by having a rest in leisure time to face better future problems.
On the other hand, some people suggest that leisure time is best used by activities 
that improve 
the 
mind. It is believed by many that mind activities such as reading 
books or doing word puzzle
s
have 

positive impact on mental health. In 
studies
, it is 
shown that these activities decrease the incidence of neurological diseases such as 
Alzheimer and Parkinson’s disease. 
I believe that, 
the 
mind needs both resting and improving in free time
, so
that we 
have 
time 
apart from work or school. They are equally important as to cope with 

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