Ielts sample essays collection

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Score: 7.5 
 
 
 
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VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Sufficiently addresses all parts of the task. The response is well developed with 
supported evidence and examples. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Logically organises information and ideas. There is clear progression throughout.
Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under 
use. Presents a clear central topic to each paragraph. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a wide range of vocabulary, fluently and flexibly. There is skilful use of some 
uncommon words although there are some occasional errors. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. Has 
good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
---------- Question 3 ----------
 
You should spend about 
40
minutes on this task. 
Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free 
entry. 
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?