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This influence of scientists and politicians essay for IELTS would score well
as it covers both opinions and the writer also gives their opinion.
It would also score highly as it discusses the issue in-depth, with good
support and examples given.
If you are a weaker candidate you may struggle to write 318 words so you
should keep it shorter as quality is more important than quantity.
For instance, the writers opinions could be shortened and simply included as
part of the conclusion. This would be quicker and take fewer words. 
The essay also has a range of grammatical structures and is accurate.
There is good use and range of vocabulary, some of it topic-related
vocabulary. For example:
interconnected world
shaping and reshaping
respective nations
rhetoric
high-tech devices
resource sustainability
scientific contributions
revolutionise

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Sources for Stories Essay
In this sources for stories essay you have to discuss whether children to be
told or read stories from their parents or whether this is no necessary as they
have other sources for stories.
Take a look at the essay question.
Some people think that parents should tell stories or read to their
children. However, others believe that these days this isn't necessary
as children have so many other sources for stories, such as books,
films and TV.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Understanding the Question

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Be careful with the question as it's easy to think from first glance that the
question is about technology versus parents reading to the child.
But if you look, the second opinion also mentions 'books', which are not
connected to technology.
So technology as a source of information can be discussed but don't make
this the sole focus of your writing as it may look like you misunderstood the

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question. 
So in your essay, in order to discuss both opinions, you need to explain:
The advantages of parents reading or telling stories to their children
The advantages of using other sources independently, such as books,
TV, and films.
And of course provide your own opinion. 
Now take a look at the essay model answer and comments below the essay.