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In summary, a robotic teacher would lack the classroom dynamism and emotional 

intelligence needed to be an effective instructor. Thus, it is clear why having a class 

run entirely by a machine is an idea that will not be realised anytime soon. As this 

essay has shown, computer technology will not replace traditional human teachers 

in the foreseeable future.

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The essay is now a complete and well-structured piece of writing. From start to fin-

ish it reads:

The use of technology is increasing rapidly in the modern world. Growing technologi-

cal influence can even be seen in the classroom. Despite this, I disagree that tech-

nology will completely replace human teachers in the foreseeable future. Analysing 

the inability of a technology-driven teacher to both cater to student learning needs