Group: 143 Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication

Writing Entry
Student: Aksulu Khudaybergenova
Group:143
Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication.
It is argued that spoken divulgated media is more significative to people than written divulgated media. This essay agrees that spoken communication overwhelm written communication. Supporting this statement, matters related to media accessibility and the clickbait overusage will be contemplated.

Firstly, spoken media is more accessible, increasing its recent popularity. Radio and TV are two main spoken media that had been increasing in popularity along the years. Listening to this media activates our receptive skills, needing less attention receiving information from them and because of current exhausting trends of life, these methods are better shaped than written ones. For example, in Spain, traditional newspapers are reducing their sales drastically, due to it and following the trend of newer written media like films or video games criticism, are using podcasts to divulge information and opinions.

In addition, the clickbait usage is damaging written media, trying to capture more lectors. It is widely known that written communication webs and even newspapers apply different methods to increase their visualizations. Clickbait is particularly popularized on the Internet, making flashy titles for news web-pages, even if that title is false or it is deceiving you. Initially, this trend gave an incredible lectors rise but owing to it, people's fidelity towards these news providers decreased and tries to ride less from this well known places. For instance, in Spain these movements are regulated nowadays buts when it started to popularize there were an immense discontent with these news, developing complaints.

In conclusion, I think that disrespectful methods and trends drove us towards peeking at spoken communication rather than written media and, additionally, accessibility increased its popularity, supasing completely the written media.

Peer review.
Overall, the author does great at using complicated words like "deceive", "overwhelm", "accessibility", etc. I liked how the author Is familiar with the topic, you can clearly see how it is easy for him to write on this topic. Also, it is very easy to see the author's opinion throughout the essay. I really enjoyed reading this essay since the author gives a lot of examples and it Is quite interesting to read them.I can't give any advices on improving the author's writing since I do not know if I could write better but I will try to do so. I would suggest to the author to use less complicated words. Even though it suits the essay, it can be difficult to read to some people.