Foreign language instruction should begin in kindergarten

Seeing the problems – repetition

One of the most common problems is you can get “stuck” on certain words. This frequently happens with words in the question itself. To some extent this is unavoidable and you will see my improved version retains quite a lot of repetition – there is simply less of it.

See the repetition corrected

Tip – think of vocabulary before you start writing

The idea is quite simple. If you think of the words you want to use before you write, then you can use them. On the other hand, if you start writing too quickly, then it becomes much harder to try and vary your vocab.