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Main body 1 – reasons why depending on a high salary is not a good idea

Note how the first/topic sentence clearly sets out the point of view. This is then supported with two reasons. This is a well-developed argument.

The first point is…

One reason why…

Something else to be taken into consideration….

Main body 2 – other factors that may be more or equally important

Note how this paragraph balances the first paragraph. The first point – The other point: the examiner immediately sees your essay structure in the first sentence.

Note how the arguments in this paragraph are supported with examples. This is another way you should develop paragraphs. See also how I vary the language in my examples:

if

for example

Conclusion – restate the main idea in the introduction and give examples from the body paragraph

The conclusion is brief. That is fine. Note though how it reflects the main idea in the introduction – completing the essay. It also uses some language from the body paragraphs to show the examiner that it is a logical conclusion;

other factors such as job satisfaction and work environment are just as important.