Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

       AF3: 

Organisation

 – Organise and present whole texts effectively, sequencing and structuring

information, ideas, and events

•  The opening of the text reflects the structure of an opening for a newspaper article, answering the “who,” “what,” 

“where,” “when,” and “why” questions; however, the author does not capture the reader’s attention with a  

hooking strategy.  

•  Text details are ordered logically through linking phrases that allow the text to flow together without 

 

noticeable gaps. 

•  The author includes a short closing that briefly summarises the text; however, a closing that incorporates a 

 

quotation from one of the guests would have been more appropriate.