Level 2a
Assessment Commentary:
AF1:
Ideas & Voice
– Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts
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The author provides more than three ideas related to his/her life. The author is beginning to provide some
elaboration for a few of his/her details, particularly in the last half of the middle section (e.g., “Next I started
Year 1 at East End Primary and this school is nice. I learned how to read and I made great, nice friends”). The
opening and details of the text
answer the “who,” “where,” “what,” and “when” questions that are applicable to this form of recount writing.
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Through the use of interesting conventions (e.g., punctuation marks), the writing is beginning to sound unique
in the opening and closing ; however, more interesting word choices and conventions are needed in the body
to make the piece unique and showcase the author’s individuality.
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