Achieve ielts academic Writing Success

Be aware of your use of articles. Read through the essays in this book and
look at how articles are used.

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Task Two Question 15
You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
 
Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the
health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better
indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being.
 
What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute
to the growth and prosperity of a country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.

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Grammar
Accurate grammar is obviously an important aspect of writing a high-scoring Task 2
essay. You should consider purchasing a good English grammar book and practicing
regularly. 
Question 15:
Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the
health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better
indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being.
 
What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute
to the growth and prosperity of a country?
 

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Exercise: Read through the following essay and correct the 
grammar
mistakes
.
 
It has often been said that the wealth of a nation 
is depending
on the health of its
citizens. In modern society, knowledge and education 
are being
also increasingly
important factor behind a strong 
economic
. In my opinion, healthcare and education 
is
equally important priorities of a government.
Firstly, in order for a country to be 
economical
strong, citizens 
must have been access 
to
good healthcare. If a citizen 
are
unhealthy and weak, it
can be assumption
that that
individual 
is not contribute
his or her potential energy, optimum work abilities and
knowledge to his or her community. By providing quality healthcare, a government 
is
ensure
that each citizen is as healthy and capable as possible. In this way, both
developing and developed countries 
have create
stronger individual citizens and, in turn,
stronger nations.
Good education 
are 
equally important in modern societies. In order for a country to
advance in any area, its citizens 
must be education
so that they can actively 
contribution
new ideas to the workforce and to the economy. For example, over the past two decades,
advances in technology 
are help
nations like India and China, among many others,
creating
strong economies and a better standard of living for many citizens. These
advances in technology and the business opportunities 
creating
from them
is
directly
attributable to education.
Aside from healthcare and 
educate
, other factors also 
are contribute
to the development
of nations. For example, abundant natural resources, positive relationships with other
nations leading to trade, efficient metropolitan infrastructures and a strong agricultural
sector
am
all factors which 
can helping 
nations 
prosperity
. However, I still believe that
healthcare and education are the two most 
importance
priorities of any government,
because if the healthcare and education systems of a nation are 
effectively
, then all other
areas of an economy are 
positive
affected.
In conclusion, in my opinion, quality healthcare and education systems 
is
equal
important to the 
develop
of a strong nation.

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