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8. The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and 
contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and 
experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree? 
Nowadays, in our competitive world, to succeed, knowledge from school and university is 
not enough. Therefore, the student who study from the school to university get benefit 
less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get 
experience and skills before going high. There are two following reasons to prove for my 
opinion. I call the group of people who study from school to university is group A and the 
other group is group B. 
Firstly, at school and university, what group A gain is almost theory, theory and theory. Of 
course, theory is very neccessary, however, you can’t do everything with theory. You 
must have praticeable experience. This is what group A lack very much. Although in the 
third of forth year at university, group A can be apprentices in some companies, to help 
them approach their future jobs, they aren’t trained well because of short time. And the 
real job is still very strange with them. After graduating, without experience, group A can’t 
accomplish their work perfectly. On the other hand, it take them time and money to keep 
up with other experienced ones and may be scorned. Therefore, group A can contribute 
less than group B who have the most two important things: skills and experience.
Secondly, as group A is contribute less, they surely get less benefit. Moreover, many 
companies which employ people in group A have to train them from the back-ground. 

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These companies take this cost from group A’s salary to get rid of the fact that their 
employees may leave after being trained to other companies. So, less benefit is 
unavoidable and certain, Whereas group B are more loyal and effective workers. They 
also have useful experience and skills. Besides, their education is the same as or even 
higher than group A. As the result, group B get more benefit absolutely.
In conclusion, I think student should go to travel or job before going high. Therefore, they 
can’t only have basic knowledge but also skills and experience which are useful for them 
to get a good job and a brilliant future.