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SAMPLE ESSAY 
Question:
Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other 
people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. 
Discuss both views and give your opinion. 
The persistent problem of poverty in the developing world has put a question mark on the relation 
between economic growth and poverty. Some individuals are of the opinion that when economy 
develops, because of industrial growth, poverty comes down. Others believe that economic growth 
leads to poverty. This essay intends to analyze both perspectives. l, however, agree with the former 
view. 
To begin with, industrial growth benefits nearly all citizens of a country, even if not equally, and 
therefore reduces poverty. For example, in rural areas, most of the poor are engaged in 
agriculture. When such a country grows through agricultural exports, it benefits both poor farmers 
and the even poorer labourers they employ. Similarly, rapid growth in manufacturing sector 
because of increase in demand creates a lot of new jobs, and eventually causes a rise in wages 
that further reduces poverty. 
My second argument comes from historical records. Western countries began discovering the 
positive relation between economic growth and poverty reduction around 1820 and as a result the 
living standards in Europe and the United States improved many fold in the next years. Economic 
growth thus eliminated mass poverty in what is today considered the developed world. Even a 
short-term view confirms that the recent acceleration of growth in many developing countries has 
reduced poverty, measured the same way. 
The opponents of this view claim that economic progress leads to inequality between the rich and 
the poor. They opine that a handful of rich are getting richer while the poor are being driven to 
the wall. However, results have proved that such inequality is only short lived and everyone has 
benefited in the long run. lt is because of the high initial inequality that it appears as if economic 
growth is leading to poverty. 
Summing up, industrial progress definitely reduces poverty. Sometimes, there is unequal 
distribution of wealth in the initial stages of economic development. Nonetheless, everyone benefits 
eventually. 

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