You should say

You should say
When you went there?
Where it is?
What you did there?
And explain why you went there?

Today I am going to speak about a place where I went on holidays. The name of the place is Manali. It’s a picturesque hill station located in Himachal Pradesh, a state in northern India. I went to Manali last week with my family. Since it is quite far, approximately 500 kilometers, from my hometown Dehradun, we decided to set off on Friday night. It was a very long drive, about 12 hours. We reached there on Saturday morning. Manali has a lot to offer to its tourists of all ages. For the elderly and religious people, there are many ancient temples. Young adventure seekers have a wide range of sporting activities like skiing, snowmobiling, rafting, river crossing, trekking and paragliding etc. at their disposal. On the first day of our holiday, we trekked through a dense cedar forest to reach Hadimba temple. It is the oldest temple of Manali and has a lot of religious significance in the local community. The next day we went to Solang Valley. Fortunately, we found plenty of snow in the valley. Without wasting our time, we made a small but very pretty igloo. We took the photographs of all the places we visited. This place has impressed me very much. The main reason is its pleasant weather. Apart from that, people are honest, friendly and co-operative. They always give you the right information. Transport facilities and hotels are also well-maintained.

14)Describe a creative person whose work you admire.

You should say
Who he/she is?
How do you know him/her?
What creative things he/she has done?
And explain why you think he or she is creative?
Well, not everyone is blessed with creativity, but I know few people who have extremely creative and innovative minds. Here I am going to talk about my science teacher Samandar whom I believe to be the most creative person I have ever come across. I feel lucky to be his student during my school days. Science is one of the most difficult subjects, and a vast majority faces difficulty understanding the subject, but our science teacher is truly a genius who always had novel ideas to teach the students. He used to emphasize/accentuate more on practical learning than theoretical, and for this, he frequently took us to science laboratories for practical learning. In addition, there are some topics related to physics that are highly impractical to comprehend by reading books only and to clear such concepts he used to teach us with the help of technology. For example, by playing videos and showing 3D images. In fact, it was also a fun way to learn for students, and we never felt bored in his classroom. Last but not least, he also used to request school management to organize some excursions to keep the fun element in education. He was such a genius and brainy person that he always had innovative ideas to bring improvements to the school. I had a wonderful experience of learning at school, especially the science subject, and the credit goes to the science teacher Samandar. 

15)Describe an item on which you spent more than expected.