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to write a BALANCED INTRODUCTION.

1 All education and healthcare should be funded by the Government and free for everyone.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is stated that, Government should pay for education and healthcare for everyone. While I agree with it, I disagree with idea that, Government should pay for everyone hence I think it would be better if Government provided the poors' needs who needs.
2 It is thought by many people that the Internet has caused people to become more isolated from society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by many that, the Internet, is the reason why people are becoming isolated. While I disagree with this statement, due to it makes us sociable and give opportunity to communicate in distance, I think that, it also makes us isolated from a real life.
3 In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree?
It is believed by some individuals that, the cost of university fees is not affordable for everyone and many think that, it should be free for every student. While I disagree with this statement, I also think that it would be better if Government payed for students who can not afford.

The poors’ needs who needs. – seems strange

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