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For example, Malaysia is one of the most urbanized countries, where
around 75% of its population resides in urban centers devastating the
natural world.
(It is possible to use statistics while giving examples. These figures do not
have to be precise as it is not possible to research information on the test;
however, they should be within an acceptable range.)
Second body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Suggest a solution in a simple sentence.)
Regulating urbanization in megacities could improve the situation
effectively.
Step 2: Explanation
(Explain how this measure could help solve the
problem.)
By making international rules to limit urbanization, we might conserve
the greenbelt in rural areas to lower temperatures in the atmosphere as
trees will naturally do their part, balancing out the amount of carbon
dioxide.

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