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On the one hand, to grow economically and technologically, the
government must undertake some measures to advance healthcare and
education systems to defy diseases and illiteracy.
( “On the one hand,” implies that there are two views.)
Step 2: Explanation
(Describe the topic sentence in more depth.)
The main reason for this is that a healthy and well-educated society has
the potentials to strive and achieve high standards of living to flourish as
a developed nation.
Step 3: Example
(In 1-2 sentences, give an example to clarify the main idea
further.)
For instance, Canada has been attracting immigrants for its advanced
public facilities. In exchange, this migrating population has been
proliferating the country’s economy sharing their expertise and wealth.
Second body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Introduce the second view mentioned in the
introduction to establish the main idea of this paragraph.)