Some people say that young people should be encouraged to leave

TASK 2

Some people say that young people should be encouraged to leave

home when they become adults while others claim it would be better
to remain with their family.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that leaving home should motivate to people from their early age and others believe staying with their family is better. This essay believe that adults would not be lean heavily on their families. This essay will firstly discuss being with family members has positive impact on humans and secondly dwelling another place can be beneficial for both.
On the one hand, living with parents and siblings can develop one's self-esteem and encourage future attempts. Parents are always concerned about their children's health and behaviour. Moreover, they are interested in offsprings future job and success. For this reasons, parents and siblings role in people's life is enourmous matter. Particularly, they will inspired every achievements of their children and give motivation for doing the best as they can. Hence, adults who dweller with parents and siblings have great confidence in themselves and are more highly likely not to be desolate. For example, according to the report which is prepared by" psychology" magazine in 2021 in New York, 70 percent of living with parents matures said that they feel gratitude for their lifestyle.
On the other hand, dwelling apart from their families can benefit for not only adults but also their family members. Firstly, Adults who are independent from parents will get more strength of feelings and stable determination. They do not lean on parents support and affirmation. Furthermore, financial stability and the ability of solving-problems are the advantages of them. Secondly, parents who live alone can feel more relaxing and avoiding any excessive stress which their children bring them. For instance, "The family" wepsite organized a survey to parents related to living matter with children or alone and the result was that 75 percent of parents chose living apart from their children.
In conclusion, Despite living with parents has a number of advantages, I believe that being freedom is priority step towards the self-development.