Figure 1. Using a five-step conceptual model for student and teacher observation of the writing process
POWER Looking at How I Write
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My Comments
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Teacher Comments
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Plan
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I chose a good topic
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Yes
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No
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I read about my topic
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Yes
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No
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I thought about what the readers will want to know
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Yes
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No
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I wrote down all my ideas on a "think sheet"
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Yes
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No
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Organize
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I put similar ideas together
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Yes
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No
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I chose the best ideas for my composition
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Yes
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No
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I numbered my ideas in logical order
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Yes
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No
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Write
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I wrote down my ideas in sentences
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Yes
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No
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When I needed help I…
____did the best I could
____looked in a book
____asked my partner
____asked the teacher
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Edit
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I read my first draft to myself
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Yes
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No
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I marked the parts I like
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Yes
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No
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I marked the parts I might want to change
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Yes
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No
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I read my first draft to my partner
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Yes
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No
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I listened to my partner's suggestions
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Yes
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No
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Rewrite
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I made changes to my composition
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Yes
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No
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I edited for correctness
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Yes
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No
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I wrote the final draft in my best writing
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Yes
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No
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Simple ways to assess the product
An effective writing process should lead to a successful product. A writing product fulfills its communicative intent if it is of appropriate length, is logical and coherent, and has a readable format. It is a pleasure to read if it is composed of well-constructed sentences and a rich variety of words that clearly convey the author's meaning. When various conceptual models of writing are compared side by side (Isaacson, 1984) five product variables seem to emerge: fluency, content, conventions, syntax, and vocabulary. Too often teachers focus their attention primarily on surface features of a student's composition related to the mechanical aspects of writing, or conventions. A balanced assessment should look at all five aspects of a student's writing. The following are simple methods for assessing each product variable. In some instances quantifiable measures are used; in others, qualitative assessments seem more appropriate.
Fluency
The first writing skill a teacher might assess with a beginning writer is fluency: being able to translate one's thoughts into written words. As concepts of print and fine motor skills develop, the student should become more proficient at writing down words and sentences into compositions of gradually increasing length. The developmental route of very young writers involves trying to understand what written language is about as they look at books, become aware of environmental print, and put pencil to paper (Clay, 1982). Then children try to relate their experiences in writing using invented spelling. As they begin to construct little stories they explore spelling patterns and develop new language patterns. Clay (1979, 1993) recommends a simple rating scale for emerging writing skills that focuses on language level (from only letters to sentences and paragraphs), message quality, and directional principles (Figure 2).
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