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Another reason in favor of my opinion is that my classmate's thoughts are very important 
for me, even if I feel that they are not good. The adolescence is a time when you begin 
your own life. It is a time when you may don't want to hear your parents’ advice. However, 
it is naturally. That is why classmates are a more important influence than parents on a 
child. 
In conclusion, everyone himself must decide how to behave in this life. But in our 
society, where democracy and independence are value, we always will have to make our 
own decisions.
 
 
69) If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an 
inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? 
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 
 
(a) If I were an employer, I would hire a worker depending upon the type of the work my 
organization deals with. There are many types of organizations that deal with different 
works like industry, restaurants, consultancy, banks, forum etc. And depending upon these 
types of organizations, the working personal also varies. If I belong to the organization that 
works for building and construction, and I require workers for the same purpose, then I 
would surely hire inexperienced workers at a lower salary. By doing this I will make my 
organization more cost effective, as for building and construction purpose, more numbers 
of workers are required, and this helps cutting down expenses. Also, when the work is 
related to the physical work, then more than experience, the desire to work counts. If the 
person is inexperienced, then he can learn how to work, until he has desired to work. But, 
if the organization is related to the professional levels, then in such case, experienced 
workers are highly required. So, the type of the work is directly related to requirement of 
the experienced or inexperienced worker with respect to the amount of the salary. As I am 
related with the international organization, I would prefer an experienced worker even at a 
higher salary. 
Experience is the most important criteria for getting professional job. Experience makes 
the person perfect. And perfect ones can only work effectively and efficiently by the time 
they join the organization. Even for the experienced person, it takes some time to 
understand the way the organization works and the management over there. So, for the 
inexperienced person, it takes almost months to years to know the working atmosphere of 
the organization depending upon the type of work. The total amount of the salary the 
worker gets by the completion of work is almost same whether the worker is experienced 
or inexperienced. Training is required for an inexperienced worker and the training 
expenses can be more. But for the experienced worker, training is not required, one can 
just understand by observing, and managing oneself. The experienced one can get the job 
done soon while, the inexperienced worker takes double the time. Double the time means 
double the salary one gets. So, whether one is experienced or not, total amount of the