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In conclusion, when one has a job as a student, he/she will benefit significantly from the 
experience. This way, students will be more responsible when they graduate. Furthermore, 
they will be more cooperative, thus will be more beneficial for the companies they will be 
working in once they will be graduated. Finally, since they'll know better how to spend 
their money, they won't get into trouble due to excessive spending. All in all, having jobs 
as students is a terrific idea and I think every student should have a working experience 
before graduating and starting their professional careers.
(b) As is known education is the most important thing for people to improve their selves 
and to adapt the real life having strong abilities. In this view, many teenagers have to go on 
their educations while they are working to provide their education or living expenses. This 
case causes not desired results consequently. 
Let's pretend a teenager is working in a supermarket in the evenings while he attends an 
schoool. Everyday he has to go to there after school so he doesn't have a chance to rest 
except weekends. Tiredness makes him embarrassed and as a result most probably he 
cannot be successful in his class. 
Secondly, teenagers who attend their educations and also work somewhere at the same 
time cannot live their lives as other teenagers who just attend schools. That means 
education and other things like doing sports, going out for eating and watching movie or 
meeting friends to make some new plans are completely separate things. If a teenager puts 
off one of them to a later time, this case affects other things. For instance, should a 
teenager is working while he is studying, he cannot meet his friends like in the past or he 
cannot separate enough time to go out to do new things. As a result of this, day by day he 
would be obliged to choose working environment to earn money to continue his education 
so this undesired case make him an unsocial person consequently. 
Thirdly, in the future when he got his real job after completing his education, he may feel 
some pressure in his mind because of the things, which couldn't be done when he's 
teenager. For example, during some conversations with his friends in the society, most 
probably he cannot find interesting issues to share with his friends because he had 
consumed all of his life at work. As a result, which may lead to some psychological 
problems for him. 
In short, should teenagers continue their educations, they mustn't have job for any reason. 
In case of working, they may not be successful in their educations. Morever, they cannot 
benefit from the opportunities of teenage term. It is fact that all kind of social solidarity 
and social welfare instructions should be gathered on this subject to offer teenagers some 
education opportunities such as scholarship to stay away from the working environment 
while they're studying.