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Another Sample Answer to the same essay question:
 
At school, children should either be taught to compete or to
cooperate. In your opinion, which form of education would best
benefit society as a whole? 
 
Describe both sides of the argument and explain your own opinion.
Educational method vary around the world. In some countries, competition is considered more
important, while in other countries, cooperation is viewed as a more essential skill. In my opinion,
both cooperation and competition are vital components of a complete education.
Competitiveness is an attribute that is encouraged in many cultures, and it can be useful in many
ways. Firstly, a child that learns how to compete and succeed will have advantages over the child
who shies away from competition. For example, the child that has competitive drive and words hard
to excel will create opportunities for himself or herself, and will be better equipped to handle
challenges and find solutions. Healthy competition can benefit society by encouraging individuals to
work hard, strive and succeed.
On the other hand, cooperation is also an essential skill. Members of a society must be able to
cooperate in order to create successful, peaceful communities. If individuals work only
competitively, without cooperating, then society will become fragmented. A good example to
illustrate this point is a sports team; if one individual strives alone to succeed, his or her task will be
more difficult. But if the team works together towards a common goal through cooperation, their
chances of winning are better. For these reasons, cooperation should be taught in schools to create
strong communities and a cooperative society.
Therefore, it is my opinion that cooperation and competition are both essential elements of education
and should both be taught in schools. If education is approached from both angles, a child might be
taught to strive and succeed, but also to help those around him or her to do the same, therefore
benefiting society by instilling both a sense of personal satisfaction and also of helpfulness.
In conclusion, cooperation and competition, when taught together to young people, will create a future
generation of successful and considerate citizens.
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