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Advantages of the tourism industry
1. Creating jobs for the locals
2. Boosting the economy
Disadvantages of the tourism industry
1. Air pollution due to frequent cheap flights
2. Loss of local culture
Explanatory sample writing
Introduction
Step 1:
Introduce and paraphrase the topic
(This is to avoid repetition.)

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The growth of the tourism industry has been remarkable globally in
recent years.
Step 2: Thesis statement 
(Outline the main advantage(s) and
disadvantage(s) briefly; giving an opinion is not needed as the question has
not asked for it.)
This industry has benefited countries worldwide economically; however,
it might have some environmental and cultural drawbacks.
First body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(In a simple sentence, introduce the main
advantage(s).)
The two main advantages of international traveling are creating jobs for
local people and boosting the economy.
Step 2: Explanation
(Explain the merits in 2-4 sentences.)
In simple terms, traveling overseas will engage various businesses and
bring about more job vacancies. International airline companies provide
people with affordable flights and accommodation. Correspondingly, the
hotel industry, local shops, and restaurants will have to employ more
staff to serve and welcome travelers. This pattern will increase
employment rates creating a healthy economy, which eases the burden of
joblessness on the government’s shoulders. Therefore, more urgent
issues could be taken care of if the economy evolves on its own.
Step 3: Example
(Provide an example for better support.)