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Reasons for the second view
1. The importance of having decent healthcare and education systems
2. The economic and technological developments of a country are more
important than its natural environment.
Choosing one reason for each point of view is enough to develop each body
paragraph. However, the writer’s opinion should be cited in the introduction,
and it should also be restated in conclusion to develop a 4-paragraph essay.
Note that each body paragraph should hold only one or two main reasons as
body paragraphs with several main ideas are likely to be confusing.
Explanatory sample writing
Introduction
Step 1: Introduce the topic and both views
(Avoid using exact words from
the topic.)
Nature has been globally deteriorated due to over-exploitation of the
environment. While it is considered by many that governments are in
charge of remedying this situation instantly, others believe that there are
more acute problems that governments need to address.
Step 2: Thesis statement 
(Extend your opinion clearly.)

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In my opinion, while the government should address pressing problems
towards developing a country, conserving wildlife is undoubtedly an
indispensable step to be taken as human existence depends on sound
ecosystems.
First body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Outline reason(s) for one of the views to form the
paragraph’s main idea.)
On the one hand, to grow economically and technologically, the
government must undertake some measures to advance healthcare and
education systems to defy diseases and illiteracy.
( “On the one hand,” implies that there are two views.)
Step 2: Explanation
(Describe the topic sentence in more depth.)