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They were skating on a cleared patch of Runaround Pond in Durham. The
bigger boys were playing hockey with old taped sticks and using a
couple of
potato baskets for goals. The little kids were just farting around the way
little kids have done since time immemorial--their ankles bowing comically
in and out, their breath puffing in the frosty twenty-degree air. At one corner
of the cleared ice two rubber tires burned sootily,
and a few parents sat
nearby, watching their children. The age of the snowmobile was still distant
and winter fun still consisted of exercising your body rather than a gasoline
engine.
Johnny had walked down from his house, just over the Pownal line, with
his skates hung over his shoulder. At six, he was a pretty fair skater. Not
good enough to join in the big kids'
hockey games yet, but able to skate
rings around most of the other first graders, who were always pinwheeling
their arms for balance or sprawling on their butts.
In the second paragraph of TDZ King starts to build up our picture of the
child John Smith once was by telling us about his world. Look at his
language:
- bigger boys
- little kids
- old taped sticks
- potato baskets for goals
- their [the little kids] ankles bowing comically in and out
Stephen King is no longer talking/writing about "John Smith" he's
writing
about "Johnny".
- Johnny is a "pretty fair skater". He's "able to skate rings around most of
the other first graders."
What Does This All Mean?
Progris riport 1 marten 3.
Dr Strauss says I shoud rite down what I think and remembir and evrey thin
g
that happins to me from now on. I dont no why but he says its importint so
they will see if they can use me. I hope they use
me becaus Miss Kinnian sa
ys
mabye they can make me smart. I want to be smart. My name is Charlie Gor
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I werk in Dormers bakery where Mr Donner gives me 11 dollers a week and
bred
or cake if I want. I am 32 yeres old and next munth is my brithday. I tolld
dr Strauss and perfesser Nemur I cant rite good but he says it dont matter he
says I shud rite just like I talk and like I rite compushishens in Miss Kinnian
s
class at the beekmin collidge center for retarted adults where I go to
lern 3 times a week on my time off. Dr Strauss says to rite
a lot evrything
I think and evrything that happins to me but I cant think anymor because I
have nothing to rite so I will close for today... yrs truly Charlie
Gordon.
Points to ponder
1.
The main setting for this story is
New York City. Many land-marks,
such as Times Square, enable the
reader to visualize the location.
Which settings are fictional and
which are pre-sent still today? What
does the novel gain from this mix of
real and fictional settings?
2.
The
combination of the progress
reports and the memory re-gressions
allow Keyes to use both a first and
third person nar-ration technique.
How would this novel be affected
by having the
story told by another
character? Miss Kinnian? Professor
Nemur? How important is the point
of view to the story line?
3.
What is this fragment about?
Why so many grammar mistakes?