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Useful Vocabulary & Expressions:
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Attainment
: something that you achieved 
Example: a young woman of impressive educational attainments. 
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To excel at smth:
to be very good at doing something 
Example: She has always excelled in foreign languages.
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To be incapable of doing smth
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To endeavour:
to try very hard to do something
Example: The buyer should always endeavour to negotiate terms.
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To pay a compliment
IELTS Writing Task 2 in April 2015 
Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit 
crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is an opinion that young offenders should be held accountable for their actions just 
as adults. While I find this viewpoint of some people justifiable to some extent, I also argue 
that treating both young and mature lawbreakers equally may prove to have adverse effects.
On the one hand, I can understand why young age should be no deterrent to the way of 
dealing with criminals. If these juvenile delinquents were easily pardoned in place of 
receiving strict punishments as adults, they would not become fully aware of the serious 
consequences of their crimes. Therefore imposing appropriate punishments could prevent 
them from conducting illegal actions in the future. Besides, young perpetrators usually 
receive lighter sentences that they deserve, which is apparently an injustice to the victims. 
In Vietnam, there was a well-known case in which a teenager murdered almost every 
member of a family deliberately, escaping the death sentence due to being a few months 
under the responsible age.
On the other hand, I am convinced that it is better for juvenile criminals to be tried in a 
different court from that for adults. Firstly, children are proven not to have sufficient 
intellectual or moral capacity to understand the outcomes of their misdeeds, so they lack 
the necessary conditions to be trial defendants as grown-up people. Secondly, when given 
a second chance, these underage convicts can have an opportunity to successfully 
rehabilitate and learn a valuable lesson. Thirdly, children can be negatively influenced by 
some bad role models, which should also be taken into consideration to give them a fair 
trial.
In conclusion, breakers of laws should not be spared of punishments, but I believe young 
offenders should be dealt with differently from adults.