Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
The two maps illustrate how a village has changed from 1970 up until
now.
(The task is introduced while paraphrasing the given topic to avoid
repetition.)
2) Overview
Overall, there have been significant changes transforming the area into a
modernized region. The village is now more industrial than in the past.
(The signal word “overall” has started the paragraph; two comparative
structures show general changes. Present perfect passive and present simple
are used accurately.)
3) Body paragraph 1
In 1970, the village used to be more natural-looking with a vast forest in
southern parts, which is now partly cut down to be replaced by a park in
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