number of cases of poor health conditions.
(The signal word “overall” is used; the two main features of the table, “the
highest and the lowest figures,” are compared in a general way without
mentioning details.)
3) Body paragraph 1
Regarding the given statistics, cardiovascular diseases affected most of
the population in England, Germany, and Spain with 6.6, 6.3, and 5.9
million people, respectively. However, this figure had a noticeable
reduction to 4.6 million Americans. In contrast, diabetes affected the
lowest number of individuals in all these countries. The figure had a
significant drop to 2.2 million for the US. In comparison, it was raised
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