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Should dangerous sports be banned?



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Should dangerous sports be banned? 
In 
summary, our society would be healthier if more people took part in sports of all kinds. 
We should continue to try to prevent accidents and injuries. However, we should also 
ensure that sports are challenging, exciting, and, above all, fun. 
Through recent medical advances we now have the capacity to determine the 
characteristics of unborn babies, produce clones, transplant animal organs to humans, as 
well as prolong life. Such technology is unethical, interferes with the course of nature and 
should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? 
1.
In conclusion, recent medical advances offer us advantages such as prolonging our 
lives, improving the quality of our lives, and providing some infertile couples with the 
opportunity to experience parenthood. On the other hand, they pose dilemmas, including 
compromising our standard of living because of a dependent elderly population, 
potentially causing harmful mental and physical side effects, and undermining our ethical 
values. Therefore we have to think about them carefully or it will not be good. 
This example follows the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. The two summary 
statements succinctly paraphrase the main arguments. The paragraph makes a 
recommendation too, however, the benefits of this are not stated, so it is vague and 
unconvincing. 
2. What is more, poor people often cannot afford to pay for these new medical 
advances.Consequently, they are only a benefit to a small, affluent part of the population, 
so we should prohibit them. 
This example does not follow the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. There is 
no statement referring to the main arguments or summary of them. In fact, it provides 
another argument, which the concluding paragraph should not contain. It does make a 
recommendation, however, this appears to be motivated by envy or jealousy, so it is not a 
very credible suggestion. 
3.To conclude, new medical advances have many positive outcomes. However, we 
should analyse our objectives carefully in order to decide what is appropriate and what 
should be permitted. If we do not, the result might not be longer more fulfilling lives, but 
instead,extended less satisfying existence. 



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