200 English Grammar Mistakes!: A workbook of Common Grammar and Punctuation Errors with Examples, Exercises and Solutions So You Never Make Them Again


Common Errors In Thesis Statement



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Common Errors In Thesis Statement
The following mistakes in thesis statement can embarrass you:
Fragmented statement: 
A thesis must make a complete thought. You cannot
have fragmented statements as a thesis statement. For example:
Incorrect:  The food in the UK is unhealthy and expensive; so we should all
consider not eating it anymore.
Correct: 
Due to the prevalence of obesity in the UK, lawmakers should
look into creating a plan             to reduce the price of healthier
foods to help everyone to be able to afford high-quality foods.
Wordiness: 
Your thesis statement should not be too wordy. You will confuse
your  readers  when  your  thesis  statement  is  too  long.  Make  it  as  short,


detailed, and precise as possible.
Incorrect:  Most athletes, such as those who play for organizations like the
NCAA or colleges, do not earn enough money, which is
terrible because they deserve to earn more for their hard work
due to the fact that colleges take advantage of the sports these
athletes pay by earning profits.
Correct: 
NCAA athletes should be given payment that is commensurate to
their efforts because they are generating revenue for
universities by putting their bodies and health on the line.

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