50 Successful Ivy League Application Essays



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50 Essays to Ivy League Schools

16. Not going deep enough.
 One of the best pieces of advice that 
we give students is to keep asking, “Why?” As an example, let’s 
say that you are writing an essay on organizing a canned food 
drive. Ask yourself why you wanted to do this. Your answer is 
that you wanted to help the homeless. Ask yourself why this was 
important to you. Your answer is that you imagined your family 
in this situation. You would greatly appreciate if others showed 


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compassion and helped you. Why else? Because you wanted to 
gain hands-on experience as a leader. The point of this exercise 
is to realize that it’s not enough to just state the facts or tell what 
happened, that you organized a canned food drive. What makes 
an essay truly compelling is explaining the “why.” You want the 
readers of your essay to understand your motivation. Keep ask-
ing yourself why until you have analyzed the situation as fully 
as possible. The answers you come up with are what will make 
your essay stronger.

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