Supporting example:
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Statistics of Bangalore traffic
Body Paragraph 2:
Central idea : Problems due to overcrowding
Supporting points:
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Accidents may increase
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People may become prey to stampede
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Reiterated that it is right to discourage people from rural areas from moving to cities and
supported the side taken in introduction.
7.Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve
poverty. So rich countries should give other types of help to poor countries
rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer:
Underdeveloped countries receive a substantial amount of aid from developed countries. But, it
is interesting to note that this measure has not eradicated poverty in the nations receiving
support. So people have started thinking that financial aid must be substituted with other forms
of assistance. I strongly believe in the latter point of view. In the following paragraphs, I shall
explain how emergent nations can prosper with other forms of aid.
Primarily, monetary assistance cannot alleviate the deep-rooted problems in the underdeveloped
nations. For example, the world bank may spend generously on country A. But the country's
political environment may not be stable. So the funds may not reach the poor. The government
may introduce namesake development programs that don't help the people. Moreover, the
country may have unresolved social problems. Eventually, the country will continue to remain
poor despite receiving huge amounts of aid. So it is high time that developed nations resort to
other forms of assistance in these countries.
Primarily, they must invest in education and healthcare. Young people should receive a quality
education. Everyone should have access to proper medical treatment. Education will help
eradicate unemployment and prevent people from resorting to unlawful activities. So developed
countries must help in building good schools, universities, and hospitals. Moreover, they can
help stabilise the government in these countries and monitor whether the political environment is
conducive for growth.
Although monetary helps in feeding the hungry lot, it is only a temporary solution.
In summary, mere financial aid will not help in developing a country. The right form of
assistance must be decided after a thorough analysis of the country's social, economic, climatic,
and political conditions.
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