Meeting at Night The grey sea and the long black land; And the yellow half-moon large and low; And the startled little waves that leap In fiery ringlets from their sleep, As I gain the cove with pushing prow, And quench its speed in the slushy sand. Then a mile of warm-scented beach; Three fields to cross till a farm appears; A tap at the pane, the quick sharp scratch And blue spurt of a lighted match, And a voice less loud, thro’ its joys and fears, Than the two hearts beating each to each! Robert Browning
Opening paragraph In ‘Meeting at Night’, the poem is attempting to communicate the excitement of a lover as he hastens towards a love tryst with his beloved. Browning effectively uses the cadences and rhythms of the verse, striking imagery and the form of the short poem to express the protagonist’s mounting excitement as he nears the meeting place and his lover. The lovers’ embrace at the end of the poem has been prepared for by the intensity of feelings that have been already expressed. 72
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Paragraph 2 Browning sets the scene in the first two lines of the poem. The monosyllables ‘grey sea’ and ‘long black land’ establishes a bleak empty landscape as background to the drama. He uses simple diction with long vowels to start the poem with a slow rhythm. This contrasts with the quickening rhythms and rising cadences that follow. The alliteration of ‘long black land’ and ‘large and low’ adds to the resonance of the verse. The rhyming pattern of the verse, which will be replicated in the second stanza, of a b c c b a helps to create the cohesion of this half of the poem. Paragraph 3 By the third line of the verse, then, the cadence is rising and this is reflected in his use of metaphor: the waves are ‘startled’ and they ‘leap in fiery ringlets’. The sea in the agitation caused by the ‘pushing prow’ reflects the excitement of the lover as he races to the meeting place. Even the use of ‘quench’ to describe the boat’s landing on the ‘slushy sand’ only manages to reinforce the feverish haste of the lover. The alliteration of ‘pushing prow’ and ‘speed in the slushy sand’ helps to emphasise the tone of wild excitement. Paragraph 4 The second stanza starts similarly to the first with a slowing of the rhythm and falling cadences: ‘a mile of warm sea-scented beach’ and ‘Three fields to cross’. Then the short, almost staccato rhythms and 73
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the rising cadence of the lines that follow anticipate the climax of the poem: ‘ A tap at the pane’ and ‘the quick sharp scratch’. The images of the ‘blue spurt’ and ‘lighted match’ suggest the explosive emotions of the lovers. Browning effectively communicates the intensity of feeling by describing the voice of one of the lovers as being ‘less loud’ than the sound of their hearts beating as they embrace. ‘Each to each!’ underlines with the additional emphasis of the climactic exclamation mark the need of the lovers to be together again. As in the first stanza, the first two lines of the poem are end-stop lines, then the next two lines are examples of enjambement where the meaning flows without pause from one line to the next. The rising cadence of ‘And’ as the first word of both lines four and five helps to keep the flow of the verse going, underlining the intensity of the feelings.