Natural english

Hello, Welcome again! This is time for today’s POV. So, first 
we will read the mini story in past tense. Stand up! Jump up, 
put a big grin on your face get ready and pay attention. So, let’s 
get started.
There was a guy. His name was Nick. He lived in Tokyo.  
He had a problem. He had a very poor background. He was poor. 
He wanted to be rich and successful. So he went to a company 
asking for a job vacancy. They said: “no, we can’t hire you, 
because  you  don’t  have  a  nice  outfit”.  He  decided  to  go  to  the 
mountains. In the mountains, he worked hard. He got a very little 
salary. He saved his money. He didn’t spend any money.
He didn’t buy clothes. He didn’t go to expensive restaurants. 
He didn’t rent expensive apartments. He stayed in a small shelter. 
After 2 years, he bought a very nice suit and black trousers.  
He also bought a watch. He was very handsome. He looked great 
and awesome. He went back to the company. They hired him.  
He worked there for 10 years
He bought a very expensive car. He built a big house. Then he 
wanted to take care of his family. But he didn’t have free time. 
He needed free time for his family. So he resigned from his job.  
He started his own business. After 2 years, he had enough money. 
He had a great company. His company could grow without him. 
He had a happy family. He had much free time. He became the 
happiest person in the world.