* The number of main body paragraphs may vary, depending on the rubric.
FORMAL STYLE
Formal style is characterized by the use of:
• advanced vocabulary
e.g. I am writing to enquire whether …… (not: I want to ask it)
• formal linking words / phrases
(consequently, however, therefore, for this reason)
e.g. I have worked as a primary school teacher for ten years and therefore have experience working with children.
• passive voice
• passive voice
e.g. I can be contacted ….. (not: You can contact me)
• polite forms without contractions
e.g. I would be grateful if …… ,
I would appreciate it if you could...
I would like to apply ...
(not: I’d like ….)
Colloquial expressions, phrasal verbs, idioms and short forms are not used in formal style.
Semi-formal letter structure
Introduction (Paragraph 1) opening remorks /reasons for writing
Main body (Paragraph 2-3-4*) development of the subject(s)
Conclusion (Final paragraph) closing remarks
* The number of main body paragraphs may vary, depending on the rubric.
SEMI-FORMAL STYLE
Semi-formal style is characterized by:
• the use of less colloquial language e.g. Thank you very much tor your letter. (instead of: Thanks a million for your letter.)
• less frequent use of short forms, phrasal verbs or idioms e.g. I am writing to request information about ... (instead of: I thought I'd drop you a line to ask about ...)
• a polite, respectful tone e.g. I was wondering if you had...
(instead of: Do you have ...)
Example:
Informal
Formal
Semi-formal
Thanks a lot for the invitation. I'd love to come to your party.
I would be delighted to attend your birthday celebration.
Thank you for your kind invitation. I would love to join you on your birthday.
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Letter to uncle. Thanking uncle for birthday present.
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Write a letter of complaint against poor service at the restaurant.
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You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor asking for permission.
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Write a letter of complaint defective book that you bought.
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You are having a graduation party at home next Sunday. You have invited 50 people to celebrate and the party will continue until late night. Write an explanation letter to your elderly neighbor.
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Write a letter to a friend who has not returned your book.
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You have had a problem with your neighbor for the past few months. You have not been able to meet with your neighbor to discuss the problem. Write a letter to your neighbor about the problem.
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Write a letter of complaint about poor bus service.
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Letter to a friend. Informing about your examinations.