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Ielts Writing Task 2 Samples by Rachel Mitchell (z-lib.org)

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SAMPLE 17
Some people think that developing countries need financial help from
international organizations to continue their development. Some people argue
that practical aid or advice is more useful. Discuss both views and give your
own opinion.
People‘s views differ over whether developing nations should receive financial
or practical support from developed countries. In my book, I strongly believe that
practical assistance would substantially contribute to the long-term growth of
these countries.
On the one hand, getting monetary support/aid plays a crucial role in alleviating
various economic problems of a country. This amount of money would probably
make a huge difference in various aspects. In terms of transportation, the
government can distribute their budget to the construction of railways towards
slowing down traffic congestion. In terms of healthcare, it is vital to provide
ethnic minority at the local territory with free medical services or raise public
awareness through implementing nationwide campaigns. In addition, fiscal help
would also temporarily lift impoverished people out of hunger, and is used for
constructing some factories creating jobs for millions of residents. This would
greatly contribute to mitigating unemployment rate.
On the other hand, while grants might be misused for wrong purposes, it is easier
to take control of practical support. This would produce long-term measures to the
problems of developing nations. The prosperous countries could spend high-
educated experts to such nations in order to carry out a few training programs for
local workers. For example, Vietnam has an agricultural economy; however, it has
still struggled with low productivity for several decades due to the lack of
advanced technology. In this context, it would be valuable to Vietnam if Japanese
advisors travelled to Vietnam so as to introduce cutting-edge technology, for
instance. Therefore, practical assistance apparently brings about a wider range of
benefits than fiscal support.
In conclusion, I am in favour of the opinion that developing territories should
prioritize practical support over monetary help. Should these nations want to gain
a strong economy, they must get a practical contribution from international
institutions.

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