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By the end of the period
, the GDP percentage
from the Finance sector 
was nearly double that of the
 Automotive industry
at 15% and 8% 
respectively
.
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Full Sample Response 1
The bar chart depicts the percentage of Gross Domestic
Product from the Automotive and Finance industries in
Australia between 2012 and 2020.
Overall, it can be seen that although both categories
increased as a percentage of GDP, Finance had much more
significant growth in ratio during the given time period.
To begin, in 2012, the Finance industry started at 6%,
whereas the Automotive Industry accounted for 4% of the
total GDP. During the next four years, the levels for both
categories remained relatively stable at around 6% and 8%,
with the Finance sector remaining slightly higher overall,
despite a small decrease between 2014 and 2016.
However, a considerable change can be seen between
the two categories in the next four years of the given period.
The income generated from the Finance sector increased
dramatically to 12% in 2018 and then nearly 15% in 2020,
while the Automotive Industry saw little change, increasing to
only 8 %. By the end of the period, the GDP percentage from
the Finance sector was nearly double that of the Automotive
industry at 15% and 8% respectively.
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Adding Transitions into Your Sentences
The U.S. produces over 2.2 billion tons of wheat every year. 
In
contrast
, Russia produces just over half a billion per year.
Italy produced large amounts of dairy products.