Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Covers all requirements of the task sufficiently. Presents, highlights and illustrates 
key features points clearly and appropriately. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. The 
candidate uses some less common lexical items with some awareness of style and 
collocation. There may be some occasional errors in word choice or spelling. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. 
Candidate has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors.
Example 4
With advancements in technology and progression in aspects of globalisation and 
urbanisation, greater attention is being paid to address ways in which improvements 
can be made to sustain the environment. Governments and private organisations are 
able to fund projects with such aims, giving them high success rates as compared to 
individual contributions in this respect, which may appear to be null and void. I,
however
,
believe that individuals have the ability to make phenomenal changes that 
are sustainable to the environment taking into consideration that collectively 
individuals have a greater reach into their communities and are therefore able to