Ielts sample essays collection

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(TA) Task Achievement
Covers the requirements of the task and presents a clear overview of main trends, 
differences or stages. Clearly presents and highlights key features but could be 
more fully extended. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. The 
candidate uses some less common lexical items with some awareness of style and 
Deleted: 
serivce

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collocation. There may be some occasional errors in word choice or spelling. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a wide range of structures. The majority of sentences are error-free. Makes 
only very occasional errors or inappropriacies. 

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---------- Question 3 ---------- 
You should spend about 
20
minutes on this task. 
The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. 
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 
make comparisons where relevant. 
You should write at least 
150
words. 
Example 1 
If we take a look at in the 
diagrams
of Australia, we will see that 
the percentage of 
Asians
increased by a fold of 6 over a period of 50 years.
But the quantity of 
European tourists decreased 
from 53% to 10% over the
50 
year period
Compared with Australia, in Germany, the ratio of tourists almost did not change, 
except for British and Asian tourists. The first was four times less, the second - two 
and a half times more. Also, if we take a look at any years, we will see that in 1960s 
Australia and Germany had the most European tourists and least had Asian tourists. 
But in 2010s the situation
changed
. 
I
n
the
1960s 
both Germany and Australia had