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To conclude, while some people can only see no benefit of studying history, I 
absolutely disagree with them as more people have benefited from learning to avoid 
making the same historical mistakes and learning to create greater innovations from 
the knowledge past inventors left behind. 
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Score: 8.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Sufficiently addresses all parts of the task. The response is well developed with 
supported evidence and examples. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Logically organises information and ideas. There is clear progression throughout.
Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately. Presents a clear central topic to 
each paragraph. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a wide range of vocabulary, fluently and flexibly. There is skilful use of some 
uncommon words although there are some occasional errors. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. Has 
good control of grammar and punctuation 
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