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Comments
The essay on museums and historical places begins well by introducing the
topic and then explaining in the thesis statement the purpose of the essay.
The first body paragraph clearly deals with the first aspect of the question,
explaining the reasons why tourists prefer to attend museums and historical
sites than local people. Two reasons are given for this. 
The second body paragraph then sets out possible solutions to the problem
of low attendance of local people. Two solutions are presented with some
examples to support them.
The conclusion then summarises the main arguments that have been
presented. 
The essay is thus well-organised and supported, and has a good range of
grammar and vocabulary, with high levels of accuracy. 
The essay would thus score highly in the IELTS test. 

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Family Values Essay
This is an IELTS family values essay, centered around the belief that
families are not as close as in the past.
If you look at the question carefully, you will see that there are two tasks.
Firstly, you have to explain why (give reasons) families are not so close. The

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second task is to state whether you think this more of
a negative or positive trend.
Take a look at the question:
Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have
become used to this.
Why is this happening?
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
So this essay is a mix of causes, advantages and disadvantages. 
Be careful in noting that it is partly as opinion essay as you have to give
your opinion as to whether the advantages outweigh (i.e. more advantages)
the disadvantages.
Take a look at the question and the model answer: