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This essay on having children later in life would score highly in the IELTS
test for the following reasons.
The Task
The essay addresses all three parts that are referred to in the question - the
reasons and the impacts on families and society. 
Evidence and support is provided for all three points, so all parts of the task
are fully covered.
Coherency and Cohesion
The essay is well-organised as each paragraph has a central idea. One body
paragraph explains the causes and the other discusses the impacts.
The ideas are all easy to follow and paragraphs and sentences are linked
together well.
Vocabulary
There is a good range of vocabulary and some evidence of less common
vocabulary and phrases that shows the writer has a good command of the
English language. 
For example:
natural step
driving force
combine family and work 
with regards to families

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In one respect
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The grammar is very accurate, and there is evidence of a wide range of
complex sentences.
For example:
As more women have pursued an education and entered the workforce,
they tend to marry later and have children later in their life
Also, the parents may find the whole experience of bringing up
children more tiring if they are older.
Given the fact that society continues to change, this trend is likely to
continue well into the future.

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Time Away from Families Essay
This cause and effects type essay is about time spent away from families.
You need to discuss why this commonly happens these days and the effects
on the individual and the families. 
Take a look at the question. How would you answer it? 
Have a go at 
brainstorming
some ideas and perhaps writing your own
response, then compare it to the answer, which is an example of an essay
that would get a high band score.