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1- The bar graph below shows the different levels of post-school 
qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who 
held them in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, 
and make comparisons where relevant.
Post-school qualification in Australia according to gender 1999
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Master's degree
Postgraduate diploma
Bachelor's degree
undergraduate diploma
Skilled vocational diploma
Percentage of Males and Females
Females
Males
The chart gives information about post-school qualifications in terms of the 
different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 
1999. We can see immediately that there were substantial differences in the 
proportion of men and women at different levels.
The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of 
those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 
10% of women. By contrast, more women held undergraduate diplomas 
(70%) and marginally more women reached degree level (55%). 
At the higher levels of education, men with postgraduate diplomas clearly 
outnumbered their female counterparts (70% and 30% respectively), and also 
constituted 60% of master's degree. 
Thus we can see that more men than women hold qualifications at the lower 
and the higher levels of education, while more women reach undergraduate 
diploma level than men. The gender difference is smallest at the level of 
Bachelor’s degree, however. 
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