Ielts essay sample

Position:
Writer refers to a number of reasons in the introduction, and to the need for a 
balanced view in the conclusion. 
Main ideas:
First sentence of the second paragraph; first and second sentences of the 
third paragraph; second sentence of the fourth paragraph. 
Linkers:
and, according to, some people, such as, if, then, there is another argument, 
because, or, there is a third factor, however, not only, also, the two views discussed, but, 
as well as 
Reference words:
the, this, who, themselves, these, this view, they, their, them 
Topic vocabulary:
medical experts, shops, unhealthy, fatty foods, chips, cooked, take-
away food, chocolate, sweet and salty, exercise, walk, television, computers, video 
games, unhealthy pastime, junk food, active games, sport, fast food outlets 
Sentence types:
A wide range of complex structures and sentences is used. 
Length:
286 words 

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