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46 
Side by side with quarrels parents often are afraid of colds which happen in kindergartens 
more frequently. Parents prefer keeping the child at home. But for a healthy child odd cold 
(if illness occurs, it goes its normal course) can't make big harm to the child. And if the 
child is adaptable to the conditions of public places earlier it would be better for him in 
future. 
In general, I am a follower of the theory of keeping children in adapted places such as 
good kindergartens. But keeping children in such a place can't replace family and home. 
Only together they make harmonic and beautiful union.
(431 words) 
 
53. Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be 
encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than 
compete become more useful adults. 
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some People who 
think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who 
are taught to co-operate as well as become more usefwl adults. There are advantages 
and disadvantages for both of the arguments. 
To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition m children is made? They could 
develope themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the 
competitbn. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular - even common now - to have a tutor who 
come to student's house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They 
learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vacations, students 
study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have 
experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous 
well-known high-school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and two national 
examinations to test students' level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to 
the good quatrty highschools and colleges. Children learn as much as they can, to wim 
the competition to obtain good quality schools. 
On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their 
own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and don't 
help others alot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why 
are there companies for many people to work in? Each of them are clever, however, there 
are weak parts and strong parts for each person. To co-operate is to improve this part. 
People talk and listen to what others thmking of and learn. That could also be a great 
opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher. 
In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather 
than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each 
other. Therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-
operation, not compete and ranking them. 
(365 words) 



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