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S M Shakib Kazmi says
March 14, 2022 at
The figure illustrates the method for
the manufacturing of cement in different steps
with the instruments involved in the process.
Furthermore, the application of the cement for
the production of concrete to build architectural
structures is demonstrated.
Overall, cement production is a stepwise process
that involves combination of different materials
like limestone and clay with different
machineries including crusher, mixer, heater and
grinder. Then, in order to implement this cement
in building mega structures, it has to be
converted into concrete.
Initially, cement synthesized by crushing
limestone and clay into a powder that further
pass through mixer into the rotating heater.
Through external flame, heat was provided to
the rotating heater to properly mix the powder
under elevated temperature. Then heated
powder pass through grinder to finally convert
into cement. Then cement was packed into the
bags.
For the manufacturing of concrete, this
synthesized cement was used that comprise of
15 % of all ingredients. Furthermore, half of the
concrete constitute of small stones known as
Gravel and sand cover the other quarter with 10
% water. All these ingredients collectively mix in
concrete mixer to blend the final product.
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Chahat says
February 7, 2022 at
The diagram here illustrates how
cement is produced and how its is used for
production of concrete. It includes a description
of the processes and steps used in order to reach
the end product, that is concrete.
First, to produce cement; limestone and clay are
crushed and mixed together . Once that is done,
the mixture is passed through a roller where
eternal heat is provided which results in grainy
cement. This grainy cement is then passed
through a grinder again to get fine cement
powder. This Cement is then ready to be packed
in bags.
Now, to produce the concrete, this cement is
used in a ratio of 15 % with 10 % of water, 25%
sand and 50% gravel.
All of this is together put in a concrete mixer,
which mixes them all together and produces
Concrete.
Overall, you can see that in order to produce
concrete, cement is required and here it shows a
complete process of how cement is produced
and further used to produce concrete.
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Geraldine Chinalu Adiele says
January 1, 2022 at
Geraldine says the diagram illustate
the level of materials consumed in the
manufacturing of cement, and the use of cement
in producing concrete for building purposes.
How ever, in the cement making production the
limestone and the clay are crushed together to
form a powder, then transfered into the mixer
before passing through the rotating heater to
heat. Then down to the grinder for the
grounding process for cement conversion then
poured into the cement bag for use.
The second process shows that (15%) of cement
(25%) sand (50%) gravel which is the small stone
plus (10%) of water are all mixed together into
the concrete mixer for the concrete production.
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Oketunji Esther says
November 11, 2021 at
The diagram display the processes
and tools involved in producing cement and
how it is converted into concrete for the purpose
of building.
Overall, the process of making cement involve
the use of limestone and clay which undergoes
four stages and equipment while concrete
production requires only one process and tool.
In the first digram, limestone and clay are added
into a crusher where they are crushed into a
powder and then thoroughly mixed in a mixer.
Subsequently, the mixed product enters into a
rotating heater which has a source of heat at an
extreme end. Furthermore, the heated product is
grinded with a grinder into cement which is
then poured into various bag.
In the second diagram, 15% of cement, 10% of
water, 25% of sand and 50% gravel which is a
type of small stone is added into a concrete
mixer. At this point, the ingredient is thoroughly
mixed to give rise to concrete which can be
utilize for building.
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Elif Özdemir says
October 31, 2021 at
The diagrams illustrate how to make
concrete for buildings with the help of
processing cement with its stages and
equipments used. Overall, limestone and clay
pass through four stages before being bagged
ready for use as cement which is 15% ingredient
of concrete. While the process of making cement
uses a number of tools, the production of
concrete requires only a concrete mixer.
In the first stage of cement production, limestone
and clay are crushed together to make the form
of powder. Then the powder is collected in the
mixer before passing into a rotating heater
which has constant heat exposure at the end of
the tube. The resulting mixture is ground in
order to produce cement. After the final product
is put into bags, then it is ready to be used as a
component of making concrete.
Regarding the second diagram, concrete consists
of 50% of gravel which is small stones. The other
materials used for concrete production are sand
(25%), cement (15%) and water (10%). All these
ingredients are poured into a concrete mixer
which is constantly rotates to combine the
materials to produce concrete.
Total 187 words.
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Taha Adnan says
February 1, 2021 at
The above diagram illustrates the
stages and equipment used in the cement
making process, and how cement is used in the
production of concrete for building purpose.
Cement is one of the four ingredients involved
in production of concrete.
Initially, ground limestone and clay are added to
a crusher to break into smaller particles. This
fine powder is next added to a mixer to create a
perfect blend of the two. Later the mixed
powder is sent into a rotating heater, to which
heat is supplied from one end. After heating the
mixture, the heated mixture is added to a
grinder to make a fine powder. The obtained fine
powder is cement. Cement is packed in bags and
distributed accordingly.
Regarding the second diagram, concrete consists
of mainly gravel, which is broken stone and
accounts to 50% of the ingredients. Other
ingredients are cement (15%), water (10), sand
(25%) and gravel (50%). All ingredients are
added into a concrete mixer is said proportions
and mixed thoroughly to produce concrete.
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Fiza says
October 16, 2021 at
The Diagram above Illustrates all
necessary steps and equipment that are
followed and used while making cement,
further how it is used to make concrete for
different building projects.
The process followed for making cement is
first limestone and clay are crushed and are
mixed in a mixer to properly combine them
together, after that the mixture is then heated
in a rotating heater once this process is
completed the final step is grinding and then
finally cement is ready to use.
In concrete production, there are four things
that are combined together with proper
measurement, things combined together are
as follows, Cement [15%], Water [10%], sand
[25%], and gravel [50% gravel are small
stones] these four materials are mixed in a
mixer and concrete is ready to use
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Sum1 says
January 30, 2021 at
Please evaluate.
The diagram illustrates the various stages
employed in the production of cement and also
the method used to make concrete. Overall,
limestone and clay passes through four main
stages in order to make the final product, which
then further added with three more ingredients
in a mixer to produce concrete. In the production
of the cement several tools along with heating
medium are used whereas concrete making
process needed only a mixer.
Initially, limestone and clay passes through a
crusher which crushes them into a powder. Now
this powder passes through a mixer, which mix
it well. Next stage is rotating heater, where
continuous heat is applied after this the heated
powder allowed to pass from a grinder which
shapes it into the final product. From here the
cement is poured and packed into bags in order
to process it for commercial purposes.
For concrete making, mainly four ingredients
Gravels, sand, cement and water in particular
proportions are used (50%, 25%, 15% and 10%
respectively). All four are fed into a mixer, which
rotates constantly and mixes them to form the
concrete.
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hamza waheed says
January 14, 2021 at
The diagram illustrates the
production of a cement which is then used to
from the concrete.
overall, the limestone and clay are used to form
cement after passing through several steps like
crushing, mixing, heating and grinding. this
cement is then used to form the concrete by
mixing with other ingredients in a concrete
mixer.
Firstly the limestone and clay are crushed to
form a powder this powder is then mixed
together in a mixer for passing through a
rotatory heater where constant heat is applied.
Furthermore this heated powder is then grinded
to form cement which is stored in bags for
delivery
regarding second diagram the concrete is made
by adding cement and other two ingredients like
water and sand into a main ingredient which is
gravel(50%) that are fine stones . All these
ingredients are mixed together in a concrete
mixer to form concrete which is used as a
building material.
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Shuhrat says
January 5, 2021 at
The diagram shows the ways in
which bricks are made for the building
industries. Overall, there are eight stages in the
whole producing process, beginning with the
digging up the clay and culminating in delivery.
In the initial stage of the process, the clay used to
make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a
large digger before placing onto a metal grid
which is used to turn the bricks into smaller
pieces. A roller assists in this process. Following
this, sand and water are added to the clay in
order to turn into bricks by either placing it into
a mould or using a wire cut. Next, these bricks is
placed in a drying oven to dry for 24-48 hours.
Once the bricks have gone through heating and
cooling process, they are then heated in a kiln at
a moderate and then a high temperature ranging
from 200 C – 1300 C, followed by cooling
process in a cooling chamber. Having been left
in the chamber for 48-72 hours, the bricks are
then packed and delivered to their destinations.
Hey Liz, I am Shukhrat from Uzbekistan. Can
you have a look at this? Does this process
deserve to get high band score in IELTS?
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Max says
August 4, 2020 at
Mam Liz, is it true that that process
diagrams and flow charts have a very very small
chance to actually be asked in the exam?
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Liz says
August 4, 2020 at
They can appear at any time. If
your results are important to you, do not
presume that diagrams or maps are
unimportant.
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Cj says
December 4, 2020 at
I know this is an old comment but
incase someone else passes by this-
I didn’t study maps thoroughly because
someone I was studying said “I’ve never seen
that, they’re never going to ask that.”
Behold- it was the task I got on exam.
Hahahaha.
Prepare for all types of tasks unless you’re
willing to schedule multiple exams in a week
to counteract the odds. 
!
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Liz says
December 5, 2020 at
Sorry to hear you got caught
out. Yes, any type of task can appear in task
1. It is essential to prepare for all of them.
Reply
khalid says
June 30, 2020 at
hello liz, regarding this essay,
shouldn’t “ground” in the second paragraph
and at the end of the third line be grounded?
Reply
Liz says
June 30, 2020 at
No. The past tense of “to grind” is
“ground” or “grinded”.
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Jyoti Grover says
May 29, 2020 at
Hello Liz
I am an ardent fan of your tutorials..i just want
to ask one thing about task 1..shall we write it in
present tense or past tense if nothing is
mentioned about time like in process tyoe
questions
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Liz says
May 29, 2020 at
If no date is given, use the present
tense.
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Hardeep kaur says
April 1, 2020 at
Hi liz …. u r commendable.. very
precise way of teaching … luv u so much
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Anshad says
March 8, 2020 at
Thanks a lot for this wonderful
website
Ieltsliz
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Liz says
March 8, 2020 at
You’re welcome 
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Sreelekha says
January 19, 2020 at
Hi Liz,
Instead of ‘overall’, can we use ‘To outline’
Thanks
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Liz says
January 19, 2020 at
Why change the signpost
“overall”? It is the best signpost to indicate an
overview. This is formal, report writing. It
will not improve your score to change that
signpost.
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Bably says
December 31, 2019 at
I have a question … do we need to
write process in passive voice or active only ?
Reply
Liz says
December 31, 2019 at
You will use a combination of both.
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Alice says
December 7, 2019 at
The diagrams explains the steps and
equipments utilize in the production of cement
and the way in which concrete are formed for
housing reasons.
Overall, it can be deduced that the process of
cement making used four equipments and two
materials. In contrast, concrete was produced
from four materials that was mixed together in
one machine which rotates in a gradual motion.
First of all, the production of cement was made
with limestone and clay which was crushed to
powder and then passed through the mixer.
Then, the materials was heated at the end of the
rotating heater tube before it was grounded.
Later on, the cement produced was packed into
bags.
However, in the production of concrete, four
materials were used compared to cement
production that utilized two resources. 15% of
cement which was made from limestone and
clay was added to 25 percent of sand. Two times
the size of sand represents the size of gravel
which is small stones. Moreover, 10% of water
was also added. All this material were mixed in
a concrete mixer which rotates in a gradual
movement.
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Jelena says
November 18, 2019 at
Dear Liz,
I noticed a difference between what you said on
one tutorial and this example here. Should
overall be separated into a single paragraph or
not?
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Liz says
November 19, 2019 at
There are no fixed rules. Diagrams
generally have a very very short introduction.
Sometimes it is no more than 10 words. For
that reason I put the overview in the same
paragraph. It’s fine to do that. For all other
task 1, I keep it as a separate paragraph. The
most important thing is using the word
“overall” to indicate to the examiner that it is
the overview and making sure all key features
are highlighted.
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Charles AMOS says
November 14, 2019 at
The flow chart illustrates the process
of making cement, while the other diagram
shows how different materials are combined
with the product to produce concrete.
Overall, cement manufacturing takes four steps,
beginning with crushing and ending with
cement in bags. Regarding concrete production,
different materials in constituencies are
added/mixed to under rotation to make
concrete.
Cement making steps are as follows: First and
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